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From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
Date: Mon, 25 Sep 2017 13:33:09 -0500
To: "public-eo-plan@w3.org" <public-eo-plan@w3.org>
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Hi Brent & Sharron,

I suggest that Editors provide diff versions for most edits. That way reviewers can choose to focus on the revisions, and not spend much energy on the content that didn't change, if they don't want to.

Anyone can create diffs of HTML files from this:
	http://services.w3.org/htmldiff

Editors could also provide diffs in Word.

If you agree, would you communicate to Editors -- and add to the appropriate section(s) under <https://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/EOWG_Participation_Info#Editing_and_Review_Teams>

Otherwise, happy to talk about it at so-plan on Wed. :-)

~Shawn


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From: 	Sinclair, Norah M <norah.sinclair@amac.gatech.edu>
To: 	Sharron Rush <srush@knowbility.org>, jgreen@visa.com <jgreen@visa.com>, shawn@w3.org <shawn@w3.org>, Pulido, Jesus <jesus.pulido@amac.gatech.edu>
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Hello Review Team,

Draft revisions of stories of web users are ready for your review and feedback. This resource is the main focus for update of the larger “How People with Disabilities Use the Web.”

The goals of the revisions are to:
• Simplify & Tersify — Make content simple and brief. Cut words. Cut Sentences.
• Bullets & Graphics — Break up passages into bullets when appropriate. Suggest graphics.
• Front-loaded Action — Use active voice, and action statements.

Drafts are posted on github Revised web stories <https://github.com/w3c/wai-people-use-web/issues/51>

Please provide your feedback and suggestions by Monday Oct. 2^nd by commenting on the github issue (preferred) or by email. The titles have not been changed other than using a first name, but may need to be changed. Thanks so much for your assistance with this.

Regards,
Norah


*Norah Sinclair *
Instructional Technology and User Support Specialist
**
AMAC Accessibility Solutions and Research Center
Georgia Institute of Technology | College of Design
512 Means Street | Suite 250 | Atlanta, GA 30318

phone 404.894.7432
www.amacusg.org <http://www.amacusg.org/>
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