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Re: diffs for review -- wasFwd: How People with Disabilities Use the Web - stories of web users ready for review

From: Eric Eggert <ee@w3.org>
Date: Tue, 26 Sep 2017 07:49:57 +0200
Cc: "public-eo-plan@w3.org" <public-eo-plan@w3.org>
Message-Id: <11CB9735-144A-467B-B3B0-DC8FE3F514EE@w3.org>
To: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
Note that with big tersifications and when moving a lot of content, the diffs get a bit unwieldy. Also the HTML diff tool shows changes in the content as well as in the template (it compared the whole rendered page), so it might be overwhelming when we also have a resource in the new layout. In that case it’s preferable to use the Github provided diff which is simplest when Markdown is used but OK for HTML sources as well.

Eric

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> On 25. Sep 2017, at 20:33, Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org> wrote:
> 
> Hi Brent & Sharron,
> 
> I suggest that Editors provide diff versions for most edits. That way reviewers can choose to focus on the revisions, and not spend much energy on the content that didn't change, if they don't want to.
> 
> Anyone can create diffs of HTML files from this:
>    http://services.w3.org/htmldiff
> 
> Editors could also provide diffs in Word.
> 
> If you agree, would you communicate to Editors -- and add to the appropriate section(s) under <https://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/wiki/EOWG_Participation_Info#Editing_and_Review_Teams>
> 
> Otherwise, happy to talk about it at so-plan on Wed. :-)
> 
> ~Shawn
> 
> 
> -------- Forwarded Message --------
> Subject:    How People with Disabilities Use the Web - stories of web users ready for review
> Resent-Date:    Fri, 22 Sep 2017 18:09:47 +0000
> Resent-From:    w3c-wai-eo@w3.org
> Date:    Fri, 22 Sep 2017 18:09:17 +0000
> From:    Sinclair, Norah M <norah.sinclair@amac.gatech.edu>
> To:    Sharron Rush <srush@knowbility.org>, jgreen@visa.com <jgreen@visa.com>, shawn@w3.org <shawn@w3.org>, Pulido, Jesus <jesus.pulido@amac.gatech.edu>
> CC:    shadi@w3.org <shadi@w3.org>, Sylvie Duchateau <sylvie.duchateau@snv.jussieu.fr>, Bakken, Brent <brent.bakken@pearson.com>, EOWG (E-mail) <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
> 
> 
> 
> Hello Review Team,
> 
> Draft revisions of stories of web users are ready for your review and feedback. This resource is the main focus for update of the larger “How People with Disabilities Use the Web.”
> 
> The goals of the revisions are to:
> • Simplify & Tersify — Make content simple and brief. Cut words. Cut Sentences.
> • Bullets & Graphics — Break up passages into bullets when appropriate. Suggest graphics.
> • Front-loaded Action — Use active voice, and action statements.
> 
> Drafts are posted on github Revised web stories <https://github.com/w3c/wai-people-use-web/issues/51>
> 
> Please provide your feedback and suggestions by Monday Oct. 2^nd by commenting on the github issue (preferred) or by email. The titles have not been changed other than using a first name, but may need to be changed. Thanks so much for your assistance with this.
> 
> Regards,
> Norah
> 
> 
> *Norah Sinclair *
> Instructional Technology and User Support Specialist
> **
> AMAC Accessibility Solutions and Research Center
> Georgia Institute of Technology | College of Design
> 512 Means Street | Suite 250 | Atlanta, GA 30318
> 
> phone 404.894.7432
> www.amacusg.org <http://www.amacusg.org/>
> 
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