Re: dwbp-ACTION-123: UPDATE - Call for comments

Thank you, Ghislain.

I will wait the next meeting to hear all the opinions.

Cheers,
Laufer

Em quinta-feira, 11 de dezembro de 2014, Ghislain Atemezing <
auguste.atemezing@eurecom.fr> escreveu:

>
> -Hi Laufer, all
>
> Please, new comments are welcome:
> http://w3c.github.io/dwbp/bp.html#metadata
>
>
> Thanks for this effort and work on this section.
> Please find below my humble comments, from a French native speaker.
>
> *#Paragraph 1*: I suggest to rephrase it to something like this ?
>
> "*Metadata is data about data which provides context and additional
> information about data. Metadata helps consumers to better understand the
> data, such as the structure, the license attached to its use, the
> publisher, the data quality, data access and the update schedule. *“
>
> *#Paragraph 2:* Maybe we can specify the tasks in "to help tasks as”, and
> substitute “that goes”?
> I suggest this one instead?
> "*Metadata can be used to help tasks as, for example, dataset discovery
> and reuse, and can be assigned considering different granularity that goes
> from a single property of a resource to a whole dataset, or all datasets
> from a specific organization.*”
>
> *#Paragraph 3*: Put SHOULD as normative after "standard vocabularies",
> and add references to PROV-O !?
>
> *#Paragraph 4*: s/Is/It is (*). I don't understand what you mean by
> "Linked Data" format. Maybe s/Linked Data/RDF/XML, RDF/TURTLE ? s/different
> W3C groups/ appropriate W3C Working Groups ?
> Also, move "(Comma-Separated Values)" to the fist time you mention CSV ?
> s/we will talk about/we report and discuss about ?
>
> HTH
>
> Cheers,
>
> Ghislain
> (*) s/x/y = substitute x by y, like in Zakim jargon.
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