- From: Bert Bos <bert@w3.org>
- Date: Fri, 26 Jul 2019 15:43:28 +0200
- To: Axel Polleres <axel.polleres@wu.ac.at>
- Cc: "Harshvardhan J. Pandit" <me@harshp.com>, Data Privacy Vocabularies and Controls Community Group <public-dpvcg@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <2006440.M173cxxgHU@nyx>
On Friday, July 26, 2019 9:05:04 AM CEST Axel Polleres wrote: > Dear all, > > As for the draft we sent artound for submission to ODBASE: > > 1) a thorough go proofread would be good, maybe one of the other > co-authors can do that, pleeeeease! 2) some of the > edits/reformulations we did in the paper might also worthwhile to be > added in the spec document in the next iteration (but I'd just keep > this as a TODO for now, and include that with the other feedback...) > 3) after submission and publication of the draft with the latest > fixes from Github (publication date should ideally be 25 July 2018, > we should push advertising to some lists... - semantic-web@w3.org > - ping? I installed new versions at https://www.w3.org/ns/dpv-gdpr.html https://www.w3.org/ns/dpv.html https://www.w3.org/ns/dpv.ttl I found a few markup errors and broken links: - Some empty TR elements - Some </thead> tags in the wrong place - Link to "rdf/LegalBasis.ttl" instead of "/rdf/dpv-gdpr.ttl" I fixed them in the draft on GitHub. There is also a broken link to #issues in dpv-gdpr.html. I'm not sure what that should link to. And dpv:Credit, dpv:Certification and dpv:Location in dpv.html each have two conflicting definitions. I think one of the two dpv:Credit should be removed, but I'm not sure which. They differ in their superclass. The other two seem to be name clashes and should be renamed. > - EU project lists? BDVA? (I would appreciate feedback on > addresses) any more suggestions? I suggest to advertise that we's > appreciate feedback on this draft by mid September? 4) we should do a > Telco, I'd suggest Tue 6th August, 16:00 ? I'm available. Bert -- Bert Bos ( W 3 C ) http://www.w3.org/ http://www.w3.org/people/bos W3C/ERCIM bert@w3.org 2004 Rt des Lucioles / BP 93 +33 (0)4 92 38 76 92 06902 Sophia Antipolis Cedex, France
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