Re: Paper accepted for presentation at ODBASE 2019

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On 25/08/2019 20:59, Axel Polleres wrote:
> As for 1), can you send a diff? I agree with 2), let's leave it for now... a full example would be nice for the final draft or as a primer, ideally from one of our use case partners.
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> Axel
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> Prof. Dr. Axel Polleres
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>> On 25.08.2019, at 19:27, Harshvardhan J. Pandit <me@harshp.com> wrote:
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>> Dear All,
>> Following reviews, I found two actionable comments.
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>> 1) the methodology followed should be better described (Review #2)
>> - I'm not sure as to what information is expected to be included to make it 'better', so have tried to make the existing information more clear.
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>> 2) In Section 6 (or in a new section), it would be nice to see a complete example which uses the proposed ontology. (Review #2)
>> - While I agree an example would be nice, I would rather first have such examples agreed and presented in an 'Example Use-cases' section of the documentation. Also, I believe Section 6 provides a good overview of potential usage, and Section 7 (conclusion) specifically mentions an intention of documenting such 'examples'.
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>> Attached is a new draft of the paper incorporating these comments.
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>> Regards,
>> Harsh
>>
>> On 22/08/2019 12:41, Harshvardhan J. Pandit wrote:
>>> Dear All,
>>> I'm pleased to share that the paper describing DPVCG's work to date has been accepted for presentation at ODBASE 2019. Reviews for the paper (see below) have been positive and are encouraging towards further work on the vocabularies.
>>> The camera-ready deadline is 02-SEP - comments and assistance is welcome.
>>> Best,
>>> Harsh
>>> P.S. The submitted paper is available at https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-dpvcg/2019Jul/0019.html
>>> -------- Forwarded Message --------
>>> Subject:  ODABSE 2019 notification for paper 183
>>> Date:  Thu, 22 Aug 2019 12:18:48 +0200
>>> From:  OTM 2019 <otm2019@easychair.org>
>>> To:  Harshvardhan J. Pandit <harshvardhan.pandit@adaptcentre.ie>
>>> SUBMISSION: 183
>>> TITLE: Creating A Vocabulary for Data Privacy
>>> ----------------------- REVIEW 1 ---------------------
>>> SUBMISSION: 183
>>> TITLE: Creating A Vocabulary for Data Privacy
>>> AUTHORS: Harshvardhan J. Pandit, Axel Polleres, Bert Bos, Rob Brennan, Bud Bruegger, Fajar J. Ekaputra, Javier D. Fernández, Roghaiyeh Gachpaz Hamed, Elmar Kiesling, Mark Lizar, Eva Schlehahn, Simon Steyskal and Rigo Wenning
>>> ----------- Overall evaluation -----------
>>> SCORE: 3 (strong accept)
>>> ----- TEXT:
>>> In this paper authors report on their work to provide a comprehensive standard vocabulary for data privacy and legally compliant personal data handling. The contribution describes the vocabulary itself along with the individual sub-modules for the different aspects of privacy. Furthermore, the authors provide information about their development approach and the evolution of the vocabulary since its conception. They detail a set of vocabularies that were considered for reuse (also positioning their work within the context of the state of the art) and adopted concepts, although mostly relying the SPECIAL Usage Policy Language. Finally, the authors describe the various extension points of the vocabulary, show example usage of the concepts and outline potential parts for contribution from the community.
>>> The paper is well-written, its structure is logical and it is well-formatted. The topic is very relevant to the conference programme and Semantic Web community and the work has high potential for very wide practical adoption in the coming years, especially with the growing adoption of GDPR. The development approach of the vocabulary is logical and strictly follows the core principles of the Semantic Web. The vocabulary itself is publicly available along with documentation detailing the different concepts and terms. In my opinion this is an excellent paper and should be presented at ODBASE.
>>> ----------------------- REVIEW 2 ---------------------
>>> SUBMISSION: 183
>>> TITLE: Creating A Vocabulary for Data Privacy
>>> AUTHORS: Harshvardhan J. Pandit, Axel Polleres, Bert Bos, Rob Brennan, Bud Bruegger, Fajar J. Ekaputra, Javier D. Fernández, Roghaiyeh Gachpaz Hamed, Elmar Kiesling, Mark Lizar, Eva Schlehahn, Simon Steyskal and Rigo Wenning
>>> ----------- Overall evaluation -----------
>>> SCORE: 2 (accept)
>>> ----- TEXT:
>>> This paper describes the main outcome from the work of the W3C’s Data Privacy Vocabulary and Controls Community Group, the Data Privacy Vocabulary.
>>> The work is well motivated and presents a solid piece of work.
>>> The work is well positioned wrt the related work.
>>> The paper is easy to read and follow.
>>> It describes the data privacy vocabulary and its possible use case scenarios.
>>> Section 4 aims at describing the methodology followed towards the creation of the vocabulary.
>>> However, the methodology followed should be better described.
>>> The vocabulary (section 5) is well described.
>>> In Section 6 (or in a new section), it would be nice to see a complete example which uses the proposed ontology.
>>> Considering the comments above, I recommend acceptance of the paper.
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>> Harshvardhan Pandit
>> PhD Researcher
>> ADAPT Centre
>> Trinity College Dublin
>> <DPVCG___ODBASE_v2.pdf>
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