Re: [screen-wake-lock] editorial: Tidy up uses of "in parallel". (#299)

@annevk @domenic this is a first attempt to tackle #293 after the discussion we've had there. I'd appreciate it if you could see if this makes sense and look at the "open items" in the PR message with things that are still unclear to me.

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