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\"Optional components...\" typo and awkward sentence

From: WCAG 2.0 Comment Form <nobody@w3.org>
Date: Fri, 29 Jun 2007 19:09:32 +0000 (GMT)
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Name: Patrick H. Lauke
Email: redux@splintered.co.uk
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Document: W2
Item Number: Conformance claims
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Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: \"Optional components...\" typo and awkward sentence
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
\"3. ... , that the content with which the content has been tested.\"



typo.

Proposed Change:
\"3. ... , with which the content has been tested.\"



if you\'re not bound by arcane \"no split infinitive\" rules and actually use language that is used every day anyway:



\"3. ... , that the content has been tested with.\"



Even easier, to avoid the debacle, turning the sentence around:



\"3. A list of user agents, ... , that were used to test the content.\"
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