Comma and \"but\" in \"Advisory Techniques\"

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• Date: Fri, 29 Jun 2007 17:31:00 +0000 (GMT)
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Name: Patrick H. Lauke
Email: redux@splintered.co.uk
Affiliation: 
Document: W2
Item Number: Important New Terms Used in WCAG 2.0
Part of Item: 
Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: Comma and \"but\" in \"Advisory Techniques\"
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
Under \"Advisory Techniques\", 1st para:



\"...that may enhance accessibility that did not qualify...\"

Proposed Change:
\"...that may enhance accessibility, but did not qualify...\"

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