Apologetic whining in \"Sufficient Techniques\" explanation

Name: Patrick H. Lauke
Email: redux@splintered.co.uk
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Document: W2
Item Number: Important New Terms Used in WCAG 2.0
Part of Item: 
Comment Type: editorial
Summary of Issue: Apologetic whining in \"Sufficient Techniques\" explanation
Comment (Including rationale for any proposed change):
Under \"Sufficient Techniques, 3rd para: \"The working group went through the effort to document...\"



To be harsh...booohooo. Is this aiming for sympathy?

Proposed Change:
\"The working group documented...\"

Received on Friday, 29 June 2007 17:29:24 UTC