Re: EO's Preety script: COGA input needed by 9/15 at 6pm ET

Can we suggest the scenario for lueise we created? It was so much more
positive.

On Wed, Sep 14, 2022 at 8:33 AM Julie Rawe <jrawe@understood.org> wrote:

> Hi, folks, this is the first of four scripts with consolidated COGA
> feedback that we're asking you to review before we send it to EO.
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> *Background:*
> COGA had a good meeting on Monday with Shadi from EO. He asked us to
> submit consolidated feedback via Github, instead of asynchronously filling
> out EO's survey. We agreed to his request.
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> To meet EO's 9/26 deadline, COGA has spent several hours at TPAC
> discussing the 4 EO scripts that involve cognitive and learning
> disabilities. We will send each of the 4 scripts out as soon as they are
> ready and will try to give you two days to respond to each one.
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> *Your input needed by this Thursday at 6pm ET:*
> Please review this Preety script
> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AvcIlJC11MDBtZi_U2pknWxQrznq5S_p_knc_jjlb2w/edit?usp=sharing>
> and use margin comments:
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>    - If you have any objections to the changes we’re suggesting in red or
>    to the explanations for these changes, or
>    - If you think something essential is missing from EO's script and/or
>    our feedback.
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> Thanks so much for your flexibility as we hustle to meet EO's very tight
> deadline, which is based on the need to finish producing this video series
> by the end of the year or else lose the funding for it.
>
> Thanks again,
> Julie
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> Julie Rawe
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> Special Projects Editor, Editorial Content, Understood
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> E: jrawe@understood.org
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> Pronounced Joo-lee Raw (like 'uncooked')
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