Re: EO's Preety script: COGA input needed by 9/15 at 6pm ET

We will still suggest it, yes.

On Thu, Sep 15, 2022 at 6:16 AM Lisa Seeman <lisa1seeman@gmail.com> wrote:

> Can we suggest the scenario for lueise we created? It was so much more
> positive.
>
> On Wed, Sep 14, 2022 at 8:33 AM Julie Rawe <jrawe@understood.org> wrote:
>
>> Hi, folks, this is the first of four scripts with consolidated COGA
>> feedback that we're asking you to review before we send it to EO.
>>
>> *Background:*
>> COGA had a good meeting on Monday with Shadi from EO. He asked us to
>> submit consolidated feedback via Github, instead of asynchronously filling
>> out EO's survey. We agreed to his request.
>>
>> To meet EO's 9/26 deadline, COGA has spent several hours at TPAC
>> discussing the 4 EO scripts that involve cognitive and learning
>> disabilities. We will send each of the 4 scripts out as soon as they are
>> ready and will try to give you two days to respond to each one.
>>
>> *Your input needed by this Thursday at 6pm ET:*
>> Please review this Preety script
>> <https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AvcIlJC11MDBtZi_U2pknWxQrznq5S_p_knc_jjlb2w/edit?usp=sharing>
>> and use margin comments:
>>
>>    - If you have any objections to the changes we’re suggesting in red
>>    or to the explanations for these changes, or
>>    - If you think something essential is missing from EO's script and/or
>>    our feedback.
>>
>>
>> Thanks so much for your flexibility as we hustle to meet EO's very tight
>> deadline, which is based on the need to finish producing this video series
>> by the end of the year or else lose the funding for it.
>>
>> Thanks again,
>> Julie
>>
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>> Julie Rawe
>>
>> Special Projects Editor, Editorial Content, Understood
>>
>> E: jrawe@understood.org
>>
>> Pronounced Joo-lee Raw (like 'uncooked')
>>
>> She | her
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Julie Rawe

Special Projects Editor, Editorial Content, Understood

E: jrawe@understood.org

Pronounced Joo-lee Raw (like 'uncooked')

She | her