[CDR] Typos/Grammar from Jeff Schiller on 2006-01-30 (public-cdf@w3.org from January 2006)

From: Jeff Schiller <codedread@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 30 Jan 2006 12:59:51 -0600
To: public-cdf@w3.org
Message-ID: <da131fde0601301059m7a33c59cv869d4d20d5bdda85@mail.gmail.com>

Sorry I believe I am one day late in my comments.  I hope they will
still be considered.

1) "Compound Document Framework 1.0" (http://www.w3.org/TR/CDR/) is
actually titled "Compound Document by Reference Framework 1.0".  CDI
is mentioned in this document.

2) 1.5 - missing informative or normative statement

3) Typos/Grammar:
    1.6 - "therefor" => "therefore"
    1.6.1 - "An different version number" => "A different version number"

4) 1.6.1 - you mention TWICE that no specified version number means "1.0"

Regards,
Jeff Schiller

Received on Monday, 30 January 2006 18:59:56 UTC