- From: Joseph Scheuhammer <clown@alum.mit.edu>
- Date: Thu, 26 May 2016 12:14:32 -0400
- To: Rich Schwerdtfeger <richschwer@gmail.com>, ARIA Working Group <public-aria@w3.org>, Matthew King <mattking@us.ibm.com>
On 2016-05-25 2:41 PM, Rich Schwerdtfeger wrote: > Please review the following text that describes Matt’s changes for > action 2039 regarding aria-activedescendant for Thursday’s call. > > Rich > > ... > > > > >> *From: *Matt King <mck@fb.com <mailto:mck@fb.com>> >> *...*** >> >> I want to call your attention to this post. I hope there is room for >> it on Thursday’s agenda and we can close action 2039 this week. >> https://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-aria/2016May/0152.html >> >> >> Thanks, >> Matt > I haven't had a lot time to work on this, but here are a couple of quick suggested editorial changes: - Missing space in the first sentence of the second paragraph: "... the type of interaction model atextbox, searchbox, ...". Need a space between the "a" and the "textbox". - In the value table, the descriptions all use the future tense. I think the present tense reads better. For example, for the "inline" value, change: "If the user provides a partial value for the input, text will appear after the caret suggesting a way to complete the input." To: "If the user provides a partial value for the input, text appears after the caret suggesting a way to complete the input." -- ;;;;joseph. 'Die Wahrheit ist Irgendwo da Draußen. Wieder.' - C. Carter -
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