Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-digest-headers-11

Hi Rob,

On Thu, 1 Jun 2023, 23:12 Rob Sayre, <sayrer@gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi,
>
> I put up a PR:
> https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/pull/2561
>
> The current text is something one would hear in spoken American English,
> but it's not usually done in writing, and it mixes pluralization and the
> passive voice in an unidiomatic way.
>
> I'm not attached to my suggestion, but the current text is a bit off.
>

You're right. Thanks for the suggested alternative, it's clearer and more
direct.

Cheers
Lucas

Received on Thursday, 1 June 2023 22:16:07 UTC