Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-httpbis-digest-headers-12: (with COMMENT)

Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-httpbis-digest-headers-12: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Hi,

Thanks for the this document.

A couple of minor comments, that are you welcome to act on, or ignore, at your
desire:

1. I'm not an HTTP expert, hence I somewhat struggled with what the definition
of an HTTP representation is, although the examples B.1 - B.3 helped.  Perhaps
consider a forward reference to the B.1 - B.3 in section 1 or section 1.2.

2. I noted that the "Code Samples" section is marked as being removed from the
final RFC, but I wondered why, and whether it wouldn't benefit for being
included as informative (non-normative text).

Regards,
Rob

Received on Tuesday, 23 May 2023 11:38:57 UTC