Hi Lars, Thanks for the review! On Thu, Feb 3, 2022 at 2:51 AM Lars Eggert via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote: > Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-02: No Objection > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Thanks to Vijay Gurbani for their General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review > (https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/MA9WZc8SHIyjFmEN_0yCkUuFodo > ). > > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- > All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may > choose to > address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by > automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so > there > will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what > you > did with these suggestions. > > Section 3. , paragraph 2, nit: > > RST exceptions are represented with an stream error (Section 8 of > [HTTP3]) o > > ^^ > Use "a" instead of "an" if the following word doesn't start with a vowel > sound, > e.g. "a sentence", "a university". Gah! Yes, of course. Thanks! I've fixed this in the Editor's Draft and will release a new -03 version shortly.Received on Monday, 7 February 2022 23:07:40 UTC
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