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Re: Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-02: (with COMMENT)

From: Ryan Hamilton <rch@google.com>
Date: Mon, 7 Feb 2022 15:07:15 -0800
Message-ID: <CAJ_4DfQCcVvmagn1PaME=g2U3OiR_3DKFrLRUbb6e47kRyjMiw@mail.gmail.com>
To: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
Cc: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets@ietf.org, httpbis-chairs@ietf.org, ietf-http-wg@w3.org, mnot@mnot.net
Hi Lars,

Thanks for the review!

On Thu, Feb 3, 2022 at 2:51 AM Lars Eggert via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
wrote:

> Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-httpbis-h3-websockets-02: No Objection
>
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> Thanks to Vijay Gurbani for their General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review
> (https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/MA9WZc8SHIyjFmEN_0yCkUuFodo
> ).
>
>
> -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
> All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may
> choose to
> address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
> automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so
> there
> will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what
> you
> did with these suggestions.
>
> Section 3. , paragraph 2, nit:
> >  RST exceptions are represented with an stream error (Section 8 of
> [HTTP3]) o
> >                                      ^^
> Use "a" instead of "an" if the following word doesn't start with a vowel
> sound,
> e.g. "a sentence", "a university".


Gah! Yes, of course. Thanks! I've fixed this in the Editor's Draft and will
release a new -03 version shortly.
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