- From: Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
- Date: Tue, 19 May 2020 15:26:14 -0700
- To: "The IESG" <iesg@ietf.org>
- Cc: draft-ietf-httpbis-client-hints@ietf.org, httpbis-chairs@ietf.org, ietf-http-wg@w3.org, Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>, mnot@mnot.net
Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-httpbis-client-hints-14: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-httpbis-client-hints/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- [[ nits ]] [ section 1 ] * "requires external device" -> "requires an external device"? [ section 2.2 ] * "indicate user agents" -> "indicate to user agents"? [ section 3.1 ] * s/sh-list/sf-list/g [ section 4.3 ] * "we can remove" -> perhaps another wording that doesn't require "we" * "unless the opt-in origin has explicitly delegated permission to another origin": is this delegation mechanism documented somewhere that should be referenced here? * "is challenging and likely" -> "may be challenging or even"
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