Re: p1-messaging proofreading

On 16.02.2010 19:57, Anthony Bryan wrote:
> Some comments...
> ...

Thanks a lot; all hopefully addressed with 
<http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/changeset/761>, except:

> Not sure what is appropriate for the 2nd sentence. "Proxies are
> required..." or "It requires proxies..." ?
>
> OLD
> The use and interpretation of HTTP version numbers has been clarified
> by [RFC2145]. Require proxies to upgrade requests to highest protocol
> version they support to deal with problems discovered in HTTP/1.0
> implementations (Section 2.5)

...that's just the terse style being used in the change log - each 
sentence is for a different change. Do you believe this is problematic?

Best regards, Julian

Received on Wednesday, 17 February 2010 14:09:34 UTC