Re: p4-conditional proofreading

Barry Leiba wrote:
> ...
> That's a fine re-write, and I'm mostly happy with it.  May I make a
> small edit?  In order to avoid people wondering whether "that value"
> refers back to the previous bullet, how's this?:
> 
>   HTTP/1.1 clients:
> 
>   o  MUST use the entity tag in any cache-conditional request (using
>      If-Match or If-None-Match) if an entity tag has been provided by
>      the origin server.
> 
>   o  SHOULD use the Last-Modified value in non-subrange cache-conditional
>      requests (using If-Modified-Since) if only a Last-Modified value has been
>      provided by the origin server.
> 
>   o  MAY use the Last-Modified value in subrange cache-conditional requests
>      (using If-Unmodified-Since) if only a Last-Modified value has been
>      provided by an HTTP/1.0 origin server.  The user agent SHOULD
>      provide a way to disable this, in case of difficulty.
> 
>   o  SHOULD use both validators in cache-conditional requests if both
>      an entity tag and a Last-Modified value have been provided by the
>      origin server.  This allows both HTTP/1.0 and HTTP/1.1 caches to
>      respond appropriately.
> ...

It is much better, indeed.

Applied with <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/wg/httpbis/trac/changeset/755>.

Best regards, Julian

Received on Monday, 1 February 2010 14:44:47 UTC