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Re: p4-conditional proofreading

From: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>
Date: Sun, 31 Jan 2010 20:26:40 +0100
Message-ID: <4B65D970.10100@gmx.de>
To: Anthony Bryan <anthonybryan@gmail.com>
CC: HTTP Working Group <ietf-http-wg@w3.org>
Anthony Bryan wrote:
> Hi,
> I don't know if this section is consistent with the other parts of the
> spec (I'm still reading my way through), but these sentence fragments
> strike me as slightly odd.
> You may want to insert "they" (or "clients" or another suitable word)?
> ...

Not sure; the text has been that way for a *long* time, so unless 
there's something that's wrong or at least misleading, I don't think it 
needs to change.

Best regards, Julian

PS: But, again, thanks for the proofreading!
Received on Sunday, 31 January 2010 19:51:48 UTC

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