- From: J.P. Martin-Flatin <martin-flatin@epfl.ch>
- Date: Mon, 15 Jun 1998 00:31:28 +0200
- To: http-wg@cuckoo.hpl.hp.com
- Cc: martin-flatin@epfl.ch
1) Section 3.2.1, replace "[42] [42]" with "[42]".
2) Section 8.1.1, replace:
Analysis of these performance
problems are available [30]; analysis and results from a prototype
implementation are in [26].
with:
Analyses of these performance problems and results from a prototype
are available [26] [30].
3) Section 8.1.1, 4th bullet, replace ";" with "," before "since".
4) Section 8.2.4, 2nd bullet of "Requirements for HTTP/1.1 origin
servers", replace:
. An origin server MAY omit a 100 (Continue) response if has already
received some or all of the request body for the corresponding
request.
with:
. An origin server MAY omit a 100 (Continue) response if it has
already received some or all of the request body for the
corresponding request.
5) Section 14.20, skip a line between the definition of expect-params and
the sentence "The server MUST respond with a 417...".
6) Section 14.20, replace:
Comparison of expectation values is case-insensitive unquoted tokens
(including the 100-continue token), and is case-sensitive for quoted-
string expectation-extensions.
with:
Comparison of expectation values is case-insensitive for unquoted
tokens (including the 100-continue token), and is case-sensitive for
quoted-string expectation-extensions.
7) Section 19.6.3.1, remove white space at the beginning of items 6 and 7.
8) In the index, alignment problems with entries "byte-range-resp-spec",
"bytes-unit", "Content-Encoding", "Expect", "Content-Language",
"entity-body", "IANA", "Methods", "qdtext", and "RFC 1738".
Jean-Philippe Martin-Flatin
Received on Sunday, 14 June 1998 15:35:07 UTC