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[closed] Re: Comments for WD-rdf-testcases-20030123

From: Jan Grant <Jan.Grant@bristol.ac.uk>
Date: Mon, 24 Feb 2003 11:18:26 +0000 (GMT)
To: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
cc: www-rdf-comments@w3.org
Message-ID: <Pine.GSO.4.44.0302241117020.27130-100000@mail.ilrt.bris.ac.uk>

On Sun, 23 Feb 2003, Susan Lesch wrote:

>
> Here are minor editorial comments for your "RDF Test Cases" Last Call
> Working Draft [1].
>
> In section 2, make the target of the URI links normative references and
> eliminate the URIs in prose. "Test Case Repository," "RDF Issue
> Tracking," "Manifest," "Manifest Head" or "Head", and "Manifest Tail"
> or "Tail" would be easier to read.
>
> s/WG/Working Group/
> s/working group/Working Group/
> In 2.1, s/these tests consist of one (or more) input documents in
> RDF/XML as is revised/These tests consist of one (or more) input
> document in RDF/XML as is revised/ or /These tests consist of one or
> more input documents in RDF/XML as are revised/
> s/is NOT drawn/is <em>not</em> drawn/
>
> s/2.4. Running the test cases/2.4. Running the Test Cases/
>
> In 2.4, Euler can be a link to a normative reference [EULER]. Same for
> cwm, n-triples2kif.pl and Euler in 3, and for "the notation used in XML
> 1.0 second edition" in 3.1. (Those are just the ones I noticed: any link
> from the prose to outside should have a link to a reference for people
> who print.)
>
>      Where the original URI Reference contains characters not allowed in
>      such a sequence, the standard escaping procedure described in [RFC
>      2396] using UTF-8 as the character encoding is applied, using UTF-8
>      as the character encoding.
> becomes:
>      Where the original URI reference contains characters not allowed in
>      such a sequence, the standard escaping procedure described in [RFC
>      2396] using UTF-8 as the character encoding is applied.
>
> minor typos:
> s/Internet Media Type/Internet media type/
> s/MIME Type/MIME type/
> s/T Texin/T. Texin/
>
> [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-rdf-testcases-20030123/
>
> Best wishes for your project,

Susan, thanks for the keen eye! I'll fold in your suggestions.

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