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Comments for WD-rdf-testcases-20030123

From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
Date: Sun, 23 Feb 2003 21:50:40 -0800
Message-Id: <p05111b00ba7f60063606@[192.168.123.158]>
To: www-rdf-comments@w3.org

Here are minor editorial comments for your "RDF Test Cases" Last Call
Working Draft [1].

In section 2, make the target of the URI links normative references and
eliminate the URIs in prose. "Test Case Repository," "RDF Issue
Tracking," "Manifest," "Manifest Head" or "Head", and "Manifest Tail"
or "Tail" would be easier to read.

s/WG/Working Group/
s/working group/Working Group/
In 2.1, s/these tests consist of one (or more) input documents in
RDF/XML as is revised/These tests consist of one (or more) input
document in RDF/XML as is revised/ or /These tests consist of one or
more input documents in RDF/XML as are revised/
s/is NOT drawn/is <em>not</em> drawn/

s/2.4. Running the test cases/2.4. Running the Test Cases/

In 2.4, Euler can be a link to a normative reference [EULER]. Same for
cwm, n-triples2kif.pl and Euler in 3, and for "the notation used in XML
1.0 second edition" in 3.1. (Those are just the ones I noticed: any link
from the prose to outside should have a link to a reference for people
who print.)

     Where the original URI Reference contains characters not allowed in
     such a sequence, the standard escaping procedure described in [RFC
     2396] using UTF-8 as the character encoding is applied, using UTF-8
     as the character encoding.
becomes:
     Where the original URI reference contains characters not allowed in
     such a sequence, the standard escaping procedure described in [RFC
     2396] using UTF-8 as the character encoding is applied.

minor typos:
s/Internet Media Type/Internet media type/
s/MIME Type/MIME type/
s/T Texin/T. Texin/

[1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2003/WD-rdf-testcases-20030123/

Best wishes for your project,
-- 
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