- From: Takeshi Imamura <IMAMU@jp.ibm.com>
- Date: Mon, 8 Apr 2002 19:20:58 +0900
- To: reagle@w3.org, merlin <merlin@baltimore.ie>
- Cc: xml-encryption@w3.org
>> My proposed revision of Takeshi's text is below. > >I included your text (with the UTF-8 encoding (Takeshi, let me know if you >don't want this) and I changed the example element names from Foo and Bar >since foo was the NS prefix). revision: 1.44; The text looks good, but I have a few comments: 1. "encoding='UTF8'" can be omitted because UTF-8 is the default encoding. 2. Something about the encoding of the document type declaration and dummy tags may need to be described. 3. As Merlin said, xml:* attributes may need to be added to the dummy start tag. 4. Step 2 of decryptXML() may need to be revised according to the text. 5. The text says "If this document is fed through the decryption transform ...", but does it mean a whole document is given to the transform? If yes, the document that was wrapped and then decrypted would be as follows: <?xml version="1.0"?> <!DOCTYPE dummy [ <!ENTITY dsig 'http://www.w3.org/2000/09/xmldsig#'> ]> <dummy> <Document xmlns="http://example.org/"> <foo:Body xmlns:foo="http://example.org/foo"> <One /> <foo:Two /> </foo:Body> </Document> </dummy> Thanks, Takeshi IMAMURA Tokyo Research Laboratory IBM Research imamu@jp.ibm.com
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