Re: Tobin's Infoset for external entities

I'm sorry for the delay, but I send a version of the spec reflecting my
comments below.  Hope it helps.

(See attached file: 20020416.html)

Thanks,
Takeshi IMAMURA
Tokyo Research Laboratory
IBM Research
imamu@jp.ibm.com



                                                                                                               
                    Joseph Reagle                                                                              
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Would you please send me a version of the specification accounting for
these changes?

On Monday 08 April 2002 06:20, you wrote:
> >> My proposed revision of Takeshi's text is below.
> >
> >I included your text (with the UTF-8 encoding (Takeshi, let me know if
> > you don't want this) and I changed the example element names from Foo
> > and Bar since foo was the NS prefix). revision: 1.44;
>
> The text looks good, but I have a few comments:
>
> 1. "encoding='UTF8'" can be omitted because UTF-8 is the default
> encoding. 2. Something about the encoding of the document type
> declaration and dummy tags may need to be described.
> 3. As Merlin said, xml:* attributes may need to be added to the dummy
> start tag.
> 4. Step 2 of decryptXML() may need to be revised according to the text.
> 5. The text says "If this document is fed through the decryption
> transform ...", but does it mean a whole document is given to the
> transform?  If yes, the document that was wrapped and then decrypted
> would be as follows:
>
> <?xml version="1.0"?>
> <!DOCTYPE dummy [
>   <!ENTITY dsig 'http://www.w3.org/2000/09/xmldsig#'>
> ]>
> <dummy>
>   <Document xmlns="http://example.org/">
>     <foo:Body xmlns:foo="http://example.org/foo">
>       <One />
>       <foo:Two />
>     </foo:Body>
>   </Document>
> </dummy>
>
> Thanks,
> Takeshi IMAMURA
> Tokyo Research Laboratory
> IBM Research
> imamu@jp.ibm.com

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