- From: Jean-Jacques Moreau <moreau@crf.canon.fr>
- Date: Tue, 26 Nov 2002 11:47:26 +0100
- To: Henrik Frystyk Nielsen <henrikn@microsoft.com>
- CC: David Fallside <fallside@us.ibm.com>, Noah Mendelsohn <noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com>, XMLP Public <xml-dist-app@w3.org>, Herve Ruellan <ruellan@crf.canon.fr>
Suggestions for B): <revised> The term 'SOAP module' refers to the specification of the syntax and semantics of one or more SOAP header blocks. *A SOAP module realizes one or more SOAP features.* A module specification adheres to the following rules. It: </revised> and C): <revised> A SOAP Module is a specification that contains the combined syntax and semantics of SOAP header blocks specified according to the rules in 3.2 SOAP Modules. *A SOAP module realizes one or more SOAP features.* </revised> I can live with D). I am fine with your other changes. Jean-Jacques. Henrik Frystyk Nielsen wrote: > > Jean-Jacques, > > Thanks for writing this up. I only have a few comments: > > A) In 1) Part 1, section 3.1 "SOAP Features", I prefer the <jjm-long> > version. > > B) In 2) Part 1, section 3.2 "SOAP Modules" I would rather not talk > about header blocks being implementations of SOAP features and would > rather have the description be symmetrical with the first description of > modules. That is, I think I prefer the initial proposal: > > "The term 'SOAP module' refers to the specification of the syntax and > semantics of one or more SOAP header blocks. A module specification > adheres to the following rules. It:" > > C) In Part 1, section 3.2 "SOAP Modules", item 2, I have the same > comment about avoiding the term "implement" but rather say: > > "A SOAP Module is a specification that contains the combined syntax and > semantics of SOAP header blocks specified according to the rules in 3.2 > SOAP Modules." > > D) Here I would rather refer to the description of features rather than > repeating the rules for referring to features using URIs etc. > > "MUST declare the features provided by a module (see SOAP features)" > > E) Regarding whether we should provide rules for what features are, I > would prefer to state that *if* one has a something that needs to be > exposed by a feature then it should be done as described. By using the > explicit reference above, I think we make it clear that SOAP features > are named regardless of whether they only live in a SOAP module or as a > separate document. I would therefore think that, if accepted, that we do > cover this case. > > F) In 5) Part 1, section 3.2 "SOAP Modules", item 5, I think Noah's > friendly amendment is fine (I think this was just spec original text) > > In summary, below is an updated proposal that takes into account A-F. I > took the liberty to simply the proposed changes to <current> vs. > <proposed>--hopefully we can keep It together in the thread! > > Thanks, > > Henrik > > * * * * * > > 1) Part 1, section 3.1 "SOAP Features" > -------------------------------------- > > <current> > When a feature is expressed this way, the combined syntax and semantics > of such SOAP header blocks are known as a SOAP Module, and are specified > according to the rules in 3.2 SOAP Modules. > </current> > > <proposed> > The combined syntax and semantics of SOAP header blocks are known as a > SOAP module, and are specified according to the rules in 3.2 SOAP > Modules. > </proposed> > > 1) Part 1, section 3.1 "SOAP Features" > -------------------------------------- > > <current> > For the purpose of this specification, the term "feature" is used to > identify an extension of the SOAP messaging framework typically > associated with the exchange of messages between communicating SOAP > nodes. Although SOAP poses no constraints on the potential scope of such > features, example features include "reliability", "security", > "correlation", and "routing". In addition, the communication might > require a variety of message exchange patterns (MEPs) such as one- way > messages, request/response interactions, and peer-to- peer > conversations. MEPs are considered to be a type of feature, and unless > otherwise stated, references in this specification to the term "feature" > apply also to MEPs. The request-response MEP specified in [SOAP Part2] > illustrates the specification of a MEP feature. > </current> > > <proposed> > *A SOAP feature is* an extension of the SOAP messaging framework. *A > SOAP feature is either associated with* the *transfer and processing of > individual* SOAP messages *or with the exchange of related messages > according to a given* message exchange pattern (MEP). *Examples of the > former type > of* features *are* "reliability", "security", "correlation" > and "routing". *Example of the second type of features > (MEPs) are* one-way messages, request/response interactions, and > peer-to-peer conversations. > </proposed> > > 2) Part 1, section 3.3 "MEPs" > ----------------------------- > > [Add the sentence about MEPs being a particular type of feature, which > was removed from proposal 1) above.] > > <current> > A Message Exchnage Pattern (MEP) is a template that establishes a > pattern for the exchange of messages between SOAP nodes. The > specification of a message exchange pattern > MUST: > <current> > > <proposed> > A Message Exchange Pattern (MEP) is a template that establishes a > pattern for the exchange of messages between SOAP nodes. *MEPs are a > type of feature, and unless otherwise stated, references in this > specification to the term "feature" apply also to MEPs. The > request-response MEP specified in [SOAP Part2] illustrates the > specification of a MEP feature.* > > The specification of a message exchange pattern MUST: > </proposed> > > 2) Part 1, section 3.2 "SOAP Modules" > ------------------------------------- > > <current> > The term 'SOAP Module' refers to the set of syntax and semantics > associated with implementing a particular feature (see 3.1 SOAP > Features) as SOAP header blocks. A Module is described in a Module > Specification, which adheres to the following rules. It: > </current> > > <proposed> > The term 'SOAP module' refers to the specification of the syntax and > semantics of one or more SOAP header blocks. A module specification > adheres to the following rules. It: > </proposed> > > 3) Part 1, Glossary > ------------------- > > <current> > None > </current> > > <proposed> > A SOAP Module is a specification that contains the combined syntax and > semantics of SOAP header blocks specified according to the rules in 3.2 > SOAP Modules. > </proposed> > > 4) Part 1, section 3.2 "SOAP Modules", item 2 > --------------------------------------------- > > <current> > MUST, if the Module implements a Feature which has already been defined > elsewhere, clearly refer to that Feature's URI. > Note that a Module may EITHER explicitly refer to a separate Feature in > this way OR may implicitly define a Feature simply by describing the > semantics of the Module. > </current> > > <proposed> > MUST declare the features provided by a module (see SOAP features). > </proposed> > > 5) Part 1, section 3.2 "SOAP Modules", item 5 > --------------------------------------------- > > <current> > MUST clearly specify any known interactions with or changes to the > interpretation of the SOAP body. Furthermore, it MUST clearly specify > any known interactions with or changes to the interpretation of other > SOAP features (whether or not those features are themselves modules). > For example, we can imagine a module which encrypts the SOAP body and > inserts a SOAP header block containing a checksum and an indication of > the encryption mechanism used. The specification for such a module would > indicate that the decryption algorithm on the receiving side is to be > run prior to any other modules which rely on the contents of the SOAP > body. > </current> > > <proposed> > MUST clearly specify any known interactions with or changes to the > interpretation of the SOAP body. Furthermore, it MUST clearly specify > any known interactions with or changes to the interpretation of other > SOAP features *and SOAP modules*. For example, we can imagine a module > which encrypts *and removes the SOAP body, inserting instead* a SOAP > header block containing the encrypted information and an indication of > the encryption mechanism used. The specification for such a module would > indicate that a decryption algorithm on the receiving side is to be used > to reconstruct the body prior to invoking other modules that rely on the > contents of the SOAP body. > </proposed> > > 6) Part 1, TOC > -------------- > > <current> > 3. SOAP Extensibility Model > 3.1 SOAP Features > 3.1.1 Requirements on Features > 3.2 SOAP Modules > 3.3 SOAP Message Exchange Patterns (MEPs) > </current> > > <proposed> > 3. SOAP Extensibility Model > 3.1 SOAP Features > 3.1.1 Requirements on Features > 3.2 SOAP Message Exchange Patterns (MEPs) > 3.3 SOAP Modules > </proposed> >
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