- From: Herve Ruellan <ruellan@crf.canon.fr>
- Date: Fri, 15 Mar 2002 11:41:12 +0100
- To: Martin Gudgin <marting@develop.com>, Noah Mendelsohn <noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com>
- CC: XML Protocol Discussion <xml-dist-app@w3.org>
+1 This new version is much clearer and has a more precise wording. I like it. I have a few remarks: - in section 2.2, the definitions of non-terminal nodes and terminal nodes overlap. I would think that a non-terminal node has *one* or more outbound edges. - in section 2.3, for "struct", what happen if several outbound edges of a struct have the same label ? Shouldn't we add "The outbound edges of a struct MUST have different labels" ? Hervé.
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