- From: Jacek Kopecky <jacek@systinet.com>
- Date: Fri, 18 Jan 2002 10:53:38 +0100 (CET)
- To: Marc Hadley <marc.hadley@sun.com>
- cc: <xml-dist-app@w3.org>
Marc, thank you for putting it in there. 8-) I have a few comments, corrections and amendments: section 3.4.2, 3rd paragraph seems to indicate that all multi-reference value use the href attribute, while it's all but one (the one that actually carries the value). I think it should be rephrased. the BNF notation: I'd rename 'size' to be 'concreteSize' because the current name suggests that '*' is not a size. last paragraph before the note: after the recent discussions on the differences between MUST,SHOULD and MAY, I'd reword the paragraph to the following: "A SOAP Encoding array MAY contain an enc:itemType attribute of type QName. This type specifies the base type for the type of every member of the array. The default value of this attribute is xsd:anyType. Each member's type SHOULD be a subtype of itemType or it must be the itemType itself. If a member does not specify its type, it is assumed to be the itemType." The weakening of MUST to SHOULD is so as not to require Schema processing. The added last sentence means to explain further the intent of the itemType attribute (not only a constraint on the members, also a default for the members' types). the Note: I'd add a sentence to the effect that Partial arrays and Sparse arrays and any other incomplete arrays can be conveyed as higher-level structures constructed of normal structs and complete arrays. I'll get to the examples later, I already know I will have some comments on the examples text, too. 8-) Best regards, Jacek Kopecky Senior Architect, Systinet (formerly Idoox) http://www.systinet.com/ On Thu, 17 Jan 2002, Marc Hadley wrote: > Jacek, > > I've integrated the work you did on SOAP arrays to the editors draft at > > http://www.w3.org/2000/xp/Group/1/10/11/soap12-part2.html > > I would be grateful is you could review it and let me know if you spot > any errors. I did a small amount of wordsmithing on the text, but > nothing drastic ;-) > > I have also updated the example which follow the text. The BNF for > arraySizeValue may be wrong, I guessed on some parts of the notation. > > Thanks, > Marc. > >
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