[Bug 5144] small editorial changes section 3.8.6-3.15.1

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=5144

           Summary: small editorial changes section 3.8.6-3.15.1
           Product: XML Schema
           Version: 1.1 only
          Platform: PC
        OS/Version: Windows XP
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Structures: XSD Part 1
        AssignedTo: cmsmcq@w3.org
        ReportedBy: johnarwe@us.ibm.com
         QAContact: www-xml-schema-comments@w3.org


3.8.6 Constraints on Model Group Schema Components, Schema Component
Constraint: Element Declarations Consistent
from: "If the {particles} contains, either directly, indirectly "
to:   "If     {particles} contains, either directly, indirectly "
twice...first line under heading, and first line after item 4

3.8.6 Constraints on Model Group Schema Components, Schema Component
Constraint: Unique Particle Attribution
first 2 notes indented too far

3.9.4.1 Principles of Validation against Particles
from: "(Language Recognition for Repetitions (§3.9.4.1  )) describes how "
to:   "(Language Recognition for Repetitions (§3.9.4.1.1)) describes how "

3.11.1 The Identity-constraint Definition Schema Component
from the heading through the unordered list, there are a number of instances of
"identity-constraint definition" in mid-sentence with an initial capital I, ie
"Identity-constraint definition".  Change to lower case i.  I counted 4 spots.

3.11.1 The Identity-constraint Definition Schema Component
"{fields} specifies XPath expressions relative to each element selected by a
{selector}. This must identify a single node"
"This" is ambiguous.  Assuming I am right in thinking you meant it to refer to
{fields} not {selector}...
from: "This                                          must"
to:   "Each {field} Xpath expression property record must"

3.11.4 Identity-constraint Definition Validation Rules
"Note: The use of [schema actual value]..."
indentation makes it look like it applies to 4.3.  I think it applies to 3,
recommend moving it in-line.  If it is not moved, indent left by a smaller
amount.

3.13.1 The Assertion Schema Component, bullet #4, 
remove final period (1 of 2 currently there)

3.13.6, Schema Component Constraint: Test Value OK, item 4
"production" occurs 2x sequentially, remove 1

3.15.1 The Annotation Schema Component
"A sequence of Element infoitems"
from: "infoitems"
to:   "information items"
_3_ times - 2x elements, 1x attributes

Received on Monday, 8 October 2007 16:26:17 UTC