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http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=5144 Summary: small editorial changes section 3.8.6-3.15.1 Product: XML Schema Version: 1.1 only Platform: PC OS/Version: Windows XP Status: NEW Severity: normal Priority: P2 Component: Structures: XSD Part 1 AssignedTo: cmsmcq@w3.org ReportedBy: johnarwe@us.ibm.com QAContact: www-xml-schema-comments@w3.org 3.8.6 Constraints on Model Group Schema Components, Schema Component Constraint: Element Declarations Consistent from: "If the {particles} contains, either directly, indirectly " to: "If {particles} contains, either directly, indirectly " twice...first line under heading, and first line after item 4 3.8.6 Constraints on Model Group Schema Components, Schema Component Constraint: Unique Particle Attribution first 2 notes indented too far 3.9.4.1 Principles of Validation against Particles from: "(Language Recognition for Repetitions (§3.9.4.1 )) describes how " to: "(Language Recognition for Repetitions (§3.9.4.1.1)) describes how " 3.11.1 The Identity-constraint Definition Schema Component from the heading through the unordered list, there are a number of instances of "identity-constraint definition" in mid-sentence with an initial capital I, ie "Identity-constraint definition". Change to lower case i. I counted 4 spots. 3.11.1 The Identity-constraint Definition Schema Component "{fields} specifies XPath expressions relative to each element selected by a {selector}. This must identify a single node" "This" is ambiguous. Assuming I am right in thinking you meant it to refer to {fields} not {selector}... from: "This must" to: "Each {field} Xpath expression property record must" 3.11.4 Identity-constraint Definition Validation Rules "Note: The use of [schema actual value]..." indentation makes it look like it applies to 4.3. I think it applies to 3, recommend moving it in-line. If it is not moved, indent left by a smaller amount. 3.13.1 The Assertion Schema Component, bullet #4, remove final period (1 of 2 currently there) 3.13.6, Schema Component Constraint: Test Value OK, item 4 "production" occurs 2x sequentially, remove 1 3.15.1 The Annotation Schema Component "A sequence of Element infoitems" from: "infoitems" to: "information items" _3_ times - 2x elements, 1x attributes
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