[Bug 5145] small editorial changes section 4.2.4-5.2

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=5145

           Summary: small editorial changes section 4.2.4-5.2
           Product: XML Schema
           Version: 1.1 only
          Platform: PC
        OS/Version: Windows XP
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Structures: XSD Part 1
        AssignedTo: cmsmcq@w3.org
        ReportedBy: johnarwe@us.ibm.com
         QAContact: www-xml-schema-comments@w3.org


4.2.4 References to schema components across namespaces (<import>)
"Note:  Some users of version 1.0 of this specification have mistakenly assumed
that the primary purpose of the <import>..."
Note says there are 2 purposes, but leaves the reader hanging as to what those
two purposes are.  Please add them.

4.2.4.1 Licensing References to Components Across Namespaces
"without massive redeclaration of the default namespace either "
Not seeing why redeclaration of the default namespace is itself a "massive"
change (one line).  It certainly has pervasive effects.  Maybe just remove
"massive" rather than baiting the reader into a religious argument.

5.2 Assessing Schema-Validity
having consistent space before each <dt> would improve readability

Received on Monday, 8 October 2007 16:36:19 UTC