[Bug 5143] small editorial changes section 3.8.4

http://www.w3.org/Bugs/Public/show_bug.cgi?id=5143

           Summary: small editorial changes section 3.8.4
           Product: XML Schema
           Version: 1.1 only
          Platform: PC
        OS/Version: Windows XP
            Status: NEW
          Severity: normal
          Priority: P2
         Component: Structures: XSD Part 1
        AssignedTo: cmsmcq@w3.org
        ReportedBy: johnarwe@us.ibm.com
         QAContact: www-xml-schema-comments@w3.org


3.8.4.1.3 All-groups
"The set V(M) (the set of sequences �locally valid� against M) is the set of
sequences S which are in L(M) and which have a �validation-path� in M. In
effect, this means that if one of the Particles in M �attributes� an element
information item to a �wildcard particle�, and a �competing� Particle
�attributes� the same item to an �element particle�, then the �element
particle� is used for validation."

"if one of the Particles in M �attributes� an element information item" just
makes my head hurt.  Earlier text had me expecting that a path P would
attribute (match) a particle with an element.  Little bits of data (particles)
behaving as actors (attributing things) ...ow, my head.

Received on Monday, 8 October 2007 16:07:00 UTC