- From: Daniel Barclay <daniel@fgm.com>
- Date: Wed, 16 Jun 2004 11:34:30 -0400
- To: www-xml-schema-comments@w3.org
Regarding the draft at http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/PER-xmlschema-1-20040318/: Section 3.11.5 says: ... A ·node table· with one entry for every ·key-sequence· (call it k) and node (call it n) such that one of the following must be true: ... That should probably say "... such that one of the following is true..." (Saying "such that some condition _must_ _be_ true" specifies something different (e.g., that things are such that some other, unspecified rule applies and requires that condition to be true).) Also, it is unclear whether "one" means "exactly one" or "at least one." (Even if it is impossible for both conditions to be true at the same time (I haven't checked), the wording should be less ambiguous up front so the reader doesn't have to first read ahead and figure out whether the conditions are mutually exclusive to know whether the ambiguity in "one" can be ignored.) Daniel
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