- From: Noah Mendelsohn <nrm@arcanedomain.com>
- Date: Sun, 14 Aug 2011 15:09:41 -0400
- To: Ashok Malhotra <ashok.malhotra@oracle.com>
- CC: "www-tag@w3.org" <www-tag@w3.org>
Ashok: As we agreed, I've forked a version of the client-side state draft and added suggested edits to highlight the importance of assigning URIs to documents in Web Applications. In keeping with Larry's suggestion, I've framed things in terms of positive advice on using URIs. I also tweaked the Abstract to remove some of the emphasis on # syntax, and I made a few clerical changes, such as adding the missing Table of Contents entries for chapter 6. I think we could still do more to improve the focus and the wording of the abstract, but the main point of this draft is the new coverage of links for documents. I'm curious what you think of it. The marked up draft with my changes is at [1]. You can find insertions and proposed deletions by looking for class="ins"/class="del" respectively in the source; I'll be glad to help with the merge if the changes prove agreeable. I think you and I will be talking by phone tomorrow, so please take a look if you can before we chat. Finally: you had mentioned the possibility of linking my blog entry [2]. My bias tends toward putting what we need into the finding itself, but I'm glad to add the link if you feel it would be appropriate. I'd put it at the end of what's now section 5.2 [3]. Certainly the blog entry goes into more detail, gives examples, and explores the possibilities for using a document model in apps where that might not have been a clear choice.. Thank you! Noah [1] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/doc/IdentifyingApplicationState-20110814 [2] http://blog.arcanedomain.com/2011/03/identifying-documents-in-web-applications/ [3] http://www.w3.org/2001/tag/doc/IdentifyingApplicationState-20110814#IdentifyDocs P.S. Tracker, this relates to ACTION-586
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