Re: Associating Resources with Namespaces (2005-12-13)

Excellent, thank you.

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Norman Walsh <Norman.Walsh@Sun.COM>
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        Subject:        Re: Associating Resources with Namespaces 
(2005-12-13)


/ noah_mendelsohn@us.ibm.com was heard to say:
| I think this is much improved and as far as I'm concerned is ready for 
| publication.  I did note the following two nits:
|
| ----------------------
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|> A user, encountering a namespace might want to find any or all of these 

| related resources.
|
| I don't think you want the comma after "user".

Indeed.

| The diagrams refers to "Norm. Reference"s.  I think that should be 
spelled 
| out, in part because it's generally clearer, and in part because your 
name 
| happens to be "Norm" and you are known to have some involvement with 
| Docbook. This could on first reading be taken as "Norman's Reference", 
| which was not intended. :-)  You do clarify in the prose, but I think 
that 
| expanding in the diagrams might be worthwhile if space isn't a problem.

Ok. I shortened them to make the pictures more attractive, but they look
ok expanded so that's what I'll do.

                                        Be seeing you,
                                          norm

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