- From: Chris Lilley <chris@w3.org>
- Date: Tue, 10 Aug 2004 22:07:56 +0200
- To: Etan Wexler <ewexler@stickdog.com>
- Cc: www-tag@w3.org
On Tuesday, August 10, 2004, 9:44:44 PM, Etan wrote:
EW> Chris Lilley wrote to <mailto:www-tag@w3.org> on 10 August 2004 in
EW> "Proposed text for 3.6.3 Supporting Navigation"
EW> (<mid:1487462124.20040810190335@w3.org>):
>> Nadia goes to http://maps.example.com, locates the museum, and
>> mails the URI
>> http://maps.example.com/oxaaca?lat=17.065;lon=-96.716;scale=6 to
>> Dirk.
EW> The path segment "oxaaca" should be "oaxaca".
According to WebArch you are not licensed to conclude that ;-)
But yes, it would be better.
>> Dirk goes to http://mymap.example.org, locates the museum, and mails
>> the URI
>> http://mymap.example.org/geo?sessionID=765345;userID=Dirk to
>> Nadia. Dirk reads Nadia's email and is able to follow the link to the
>> map. Nadia reads Dirk's email, follows the link, and receives an
>> error
>> message 'No such session/user'. She has start again from
>> http://mymap.example.org and find the museum location once more.
EW> From the W3C Manual of Style [MANUAL]:
EW> First person pronouns ("I," "we") which are hard to translate should
EW> not be used in the text of examples. See the email message "Personal
EW> pronouns in specifications" [PRONOUNS]. Avoid "my" and "me" in examples
EW> (e.g., use "userResource" and not "myResource").
Okay, s/She/Nadia
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