- From: Francois Remy <frremy@microsoft.com>
- Date: Wed, 7 Sep 2016 18:09:34 +0000
- To: fantasai <fantasai.lists@inkedblade.net>, Greg Whitworth <gwhit@microsoft.com>
- CC: "www-style@w3.org" <www-style@w3.org>
Thanks again fantasai for the review. Here is the "disposition of comments" :-) ======================================================================= > 1. “layouted” is not a word. The past tense of the verb “lay out” is “laid out”. Oh no, I thought the official approval to make up new words came pre-packaged with joining the csswg, I am disappointed ;-) I reluctantly fixed it, though :-) ======================================================================= > 2. A table-root element is said to be <dfn>layouted in collapsed-borders mode</dfn> Mostly fixed. The prose could be simplified further but that will do, for now. ======================================================================= > 3. CSS layout operates on boxes, not elements. Uh, yeah. Fixed. ======================================================================= > 4. The format for defining values of a CSS property is <dl dfn-for="property-name" dfn-type="value"> <dt><dfn>value</dfn> <dd>... <dt><dfn>other-value</dfn> <dd>... </dl> Where do you think this applies? Caption-sides? ======================================================================= > 5. Invalid use of “may” Fixed. That is a text copy-pasted from CSS 2.1 though, you might want to fix the source. http://www.w3.org/TR/CSS21/tables.html#propdef-border-spacing That's all for now
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