- From: fantasai <fantasai.lists@inkedblade.net>
- Date: Mon, 19 Jan 2015 21:16:14 -0500
- To: "Phillips, Addison" <addison@lab126.com>, "CSS WWW Style (www-style@w3.org)" <www-style@w3.org>
- CC: "www-international@w3.org" <www-international@w3.org>
On 11/05/2014 02:46 PM, Phillips, Addison wrote: > Hello CSS WG, > > Here is my last comment on CSS Flexbox. Thanks. > > Raised by: > Addison Phillips > Opened on: > 2014-11-05 > Description: > Section 5.3 > http://www.w3.org/TR/css-flexbox-1/#flex-flow-property > > Example 5 reads, in part, "Some examples of valid flows in an > English (left-to-right, horizontal writing mode) document:". > This is good, but slightly misleadingly phrased. Perhaps "Some > examples of valid flows in a left-to-right, horizontal writing > mode document (such as found in the English language):" Hi Addison, While I'm not adamant about the position, I do tend to prefer examples to be more concrete than abstract, since I think that helps readers relate more closely to what's happening. This is why the writing mode is listed in a parenthetical rather than the other way around. I don't object to changing if i18n feels that is less helpful than the other way around, though. Let me know what you think~ ~fantasai
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