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Re: [css3-fonts] Minor Comments on Font Loading Guidelins

From: fantasai <fantasai.lists@inkedblade.net>
Date: Tue, 21 May 2013 14:56:59 +0800
Message-ID: <519B1ABB.7070300@inkedblade.net>
To: www-style@w3.org
On 05/21/2013 02:44 PM, fantasai wrote:
>
>    # user agents may render text as it would be rendered if
>    # downloadable font resources are not available or they
>    # may render text transparently with fallback fonts to
>    # avoid a flash of text using a fallback font. In cases
>
> This is a pretty long sentence already, and the or isn't
> really exclusive: you have to do the first in order to do
> the second. So I suggest (changes marked with ^^^)
>
>    | downloadable font resources are not available. They
>    |                                              ^^^
>    | may also render such text transparently to avoid a
>    |     ^^^^        ^^^^
>    | flash of text in the fallback font. However, in cases
>                                          ^^^^^^^^^^

Ah, missed an important suggested edit here:

   s/render/temporarily render/

I think that should help make it clear that you can't keep
it that way. :)

~fantasai
Received on Tuesday, 21 May 2013 06:57:32 UTC

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