Leif Halvard Silli wrote: > fantasai On 09-10-20 04.20: > >> http://dev.w3.org/cvsweb/csswg/selectors3/Overview.html.diff?r1=1.46&r2=1.47&f=h >> >> Please let me know if this addresses your comments. > > Nits: you wrote "an an" instead of "an" (first sentence). Fixed. Thanks. > Proposal/Comment > > In short, I suggest that the last sentence should start like this (my > changes in UPPERCASE): > > <p>If a universal selector represented by THE <code>*</code> ONLY > (THAT IS: without a namespace prefix) is not immediately followed by a > pseudo-element AND ALSO IS NOT the only component IN a sequence of > simple selectors, then [ ... etc] > > Background/Explanations > > ... I've inserted "i.e." inside the parentheses. I decline to make the other changes, as I feel the sentence is adequately clear as-is and I don't find the proposed change to be a noticeable improvement, if any. ~fantasaiReceived on Tuesday, 20 October 2009 19:42:20 UTC
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