Re: [css3-namespace] Editorial

karl@w3.org wrote:
> Hi,
> This is a QA Review comment for "CSS Module: Namespaces"
> http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-css3-namespace-20060828/
> 2006-08-28
> 2nd WD
> 
> About http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-css3-namespace-20060828/
> 
> # This specification, This document, etc. to start a sentence
>  [[[
>  This specification defines the syntax for using namespaces in CSS.
>  ]]]
> 
> Avoid using "this specification", but talk directly about the technology,
> it is always lighter for the reader. For example, 
>  "CSS Module: Namespaces" defines the syntax for using 
>  XML namespaces in CSS. …"

I don't think it is always lighter, so I haven't changed all occurrences.
But I changed most. :)

   http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-namespace/

Let me know if this address your comment.

~fantasai

Received on Wednesday, 6 February 2008 22:04:44 UTC