- From: fantasai <fantasai.lists@inkedblade.net>
- Date: Wed, 06 Feb 2008 14:04:24 -0800
- To: karl@w3.org
- CC: www-style@w3.org
karl@w3.org wrote: > Hi, > This is a QA Review comment for "CSS Module: Namespaces" > http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-css3-namespace-20060828/ > 2006-08-28 > 2nd WD > > About http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/WD-css3-namespace-20060828/ > > # This specification, This document, etc. to start a sentence > [[[ > This specification defines the syntax for using namespaces in CSS. > ]]] > > Avoid using "this specification", but talk directly about the technology, > it is always lighter for the reader. For example, > "CSS Module: Namespaces" defines the syntax for using > XML namespaces in CSS. …" I don't think it is always lighter, so I haven't changed all occurrences. But I changed most. :) http://dev.w3.org/csswg/css3-namespace/ Let me know if this address your comment. ~fantasai
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