- From: Bert Bos <bert@w3.org>
- Date: Fri, 6 Aug 2004 20:03:27 +0200
- To: Etan Wexler <ewexler@stickdog.com>
- Cc: www-style@w3.org
Etan Wexler writes:
>
> Following are comments on the draft "The CSS 'Reader' Media Type"
> (<http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/WD-css3-reader-20040224>).
>
>
>
> In General
>
>
> The draft suffers from the URI-in-your-face idiom described by Susan
> Lesch in the W3C Manual of Style
> (<http://www.w3.org/2001/06/manual/#ref-section>). The suffering is
> worst in the references, but apparent elsewhere.
The only visible URLs I could find were in the required places ("this
version," status and bibliography). Did I miss any?
> 2. Introduction
> (<http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/WD-css3-reader-20040224/#intro>)
>
>
> From the second example:
>
> <?xml-stylesheet href="style1.css" type="text/css"
> media="screen and (color) and (max-width: 400px"?>
>
> The malformed expression "(max-width: 400px" needs an ending
> parenthesis.
>
> <?xml-stylesheet href="style2.css" type="text/css"
> media="reader and (max-device-ratio: 1/1)"?>
>
> The feature "max-device-ratio" is not defined. It needs to be
> "max-device-aspect-ratio".
Thanks, I'll fix these errors (in the internal draft for now).
Bert
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