[css3-reader] Editorial suggestions

Following are comments on the draft "The CSS 'Reader' Media Type" 

In General

The draft suffers from the URI-in-your-face idiom described by Susan 
Lesch in the W3C Manual of Style 
(<http://www.w3.org/2001/06/manual/#ref-section>). The suffering is 
worst in the references, but apparent elsewhere.

2. Introduction 

 From the second example:

     <?xml-stylesheet href="style1.css" type="text/css"
       media="screen and (color) and (max-width: 400px"?>

The malformed expression "(max-width: 400px" needs an ending 

     <?xml-stylesheet href="style2.css" type="text/css"
       media="reader and (max-device-ratio: 1/1)"?>

The feature "max-device-ratio" is not defined. It needs to be 

Etan Wexler.

Received on Thursday, 5 August 2004 17:49:45 UTC