- From: Etan Wexler <ewexler@stickdog.com>
- Date: Thu, 5 Aug 2004 14:47:59 -0700
- To: www-style@w3.org
Following are comments on the draft "The CSS 'Reader' Media Type"
(<http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/WD-css3-reader-20040224>).
In General
The draft suffers from the URI-in-your-face idiom described by Susan
Lesch in the W3C Manual of Style
(<http://www.w3.org/2001/06/manual/#ref-section>). The suffering is
worst in the references, but apparent elsewhere.
2. Introduction
(<http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/WD-css3-reader-20040224/#intro>)
From the second example:
<?xml-stylesheet href="style1.css" type="text/css"
media="screen and (color) and (max-width: 400px"?>
The malformed expression "(max-width: 400px" needs an ending
parenthesis.
<?xml-stylesheet href="style2.css" type="text/css"
media="reader and (max-device-ratio: 1/1)"?>
The feature "max-device-ratio" is not defined. It needs to be
"max-device-aspect-ratio".
--
Etan Wexler.
Received on Thursday, 5 August 2004 17:49:45 UTC