- From: Jeremy Rand <jeremy@asofok.org>
- Date: Wed, 14 May 2003 17:41:31 -0400 (EDT)
- To: "W3C Style List" <www-style@w3.org>
Found some grammar mistakes in the Color Module CR. In the "Status of this document" section and in 1. (Introduction), "implementors" should be spelled "implementers." (I'm not sure; it looks better to me with an o, but MS Word insists that it's an e.) In the "Status of this document" section, "publically" should be spelled "publicly." In the "Status of this document" section, in the sentence "Otherwise, as soon as the exit criteria is met, it will progress to become Proposed Recommendation," it should say "criteria are met," not "criteria is met." In 3.2, "postprocessing" should be hyphenated as "post-processing," and "offscreen" should be hyphenated as "off-screen." In 3.4, in the sentence "The behavior of values other than auto and inherit are defined by the International Color Consortium standard [ICC32]," it should either say "behaviors" and "are defined" or "behavior" and "is defined." In 4.2.3, in the sentence "This keyword can be considered a shorthand for rgba(0,0,0,0) which is its computed value," "a shorthand" should be just "shorthand." Thanks, Jeremy Rand This message was brought to you using 100% post-consumer recycled electrons.
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