Re: WD-CSS21-20020802 section 14, "Colors and Backgrounds", editorial suggestions

Etan Wexler wrote:
> 14.2.1 Background properties: 'background-color', 'background-image',
> 'background-repeat', 'background-attachment', 'background-position', and
> 'background'
> "it sets the horizontal position only, the vertical position will be 50%"
> Add "and" after the comma.

The relationship is more accurately expressed as "as a result". "And"
implies a parallel relationship, and it makes the "only" seem awkward.
It would be better to just change the comma to a semicolon.


Received on Saturday, 16 November 2002 19:40:10 UTC