- From: Susan Lesch <lesch@w3.org>
- Date: Mon, 1 May 2000 19:48:57 -0800
- To: aaron.m.cohen@intel.com, www-smil@w3.org
Hello, Aaron, Thank you so much for the feedback on Last Call comments [1]. I'd let this go, but will try to answer since you ask. > Also, parenthesized amplification that is itself a complete > sentence needs a preceding semicolon. They appear throughout > the spec and I won't enumerate them here. For example, in 3.1 > final section for attributeType: The attribute value is one of > the following (values are case-sensitive): ^ The attribute > value is one of the following; (values are case-sensitive): > > SYMM Response: This is new to us. Is it somewhere is White's > style guide? Yes. (Well, for sure it is in Strunk [2].) "...5. Do not join independent clauses by a comma. "If two or more clauses, grammatically complete and not joined by a conjunction, are to form a single compound sentence, the proper mark of punctuation is a semicolon." It's also in _The Chicago Manual of Style_. "...Semicolon: It should always be used, of course, between the two parts of a compound sentence (independent, or coordinate, clauses) when they are not connected by a conjunction." [1] http://www.w3.org/AudioVideo/Group/Animation/SMILAnimationLastCallResp onses#LESCH [2] http://www.bartleby.com/141/strunk.html#5 Best wishes, -- Susan Lesch Intern, W3C
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