- From: Susan Lesch <susan@textet.com>
- Date: Mon, 13 Dec 1999 19:50:58 -0800
- To: www-rdf-comments@w3.org
Here are a few minor typos in the RDF Schema PR [1]. They are so minor that I hesitate to mention them. Reserved words, keywords, and examples could be regularized in CODE. In its prose, this version of the specification uses single quotes, double quotes, EM, CODE, or a leading capital letter, all at unpredictable times. I did not enumerate candidates for regularization in this report. "Sub-class" or "subclass" and "super-class" or "superclass" could be hyphenated (or not) the same in each instance. "Make sense" is used both in single and double quotes. I'm not sure which is correct. From this point, a section number and a paragraph number are followed by a quote and my correction. Comments are in brackets []. 1. par 1 areas; for example: areas, for example: 1. par 5 (e.g. (e.g., [twice] 1.1.2 par 2 'schemas' schemas [not sure] Resource resource 1.2.1 par 2 (eg. caches) (e.g., caches) 2.1 par 3 ways. e.g., ways - e.g., 2.1.1 par 1 rectangle, a rectangle; a or rectangle. A 2.1.2 par 1 Resource resource Class class rest). rest.) [or remove parentheses for this sentence] 2.2.3 par 1 Class class 2.3.2.1 par 2 <code> rdf:type </code> of <code>rdf:type</code> of class (eg. 'Van' class (e.g., 'Van' <code> <Van ID="v_323"/> </code> <code><Van ID="v_323"/></code> Similarly, <code> <rdfs:Class ID="MiniVan"/> </code> Similarly, <code><rdfs:Class ID="MiniVan"/></code> serialisation serialization 2.3.3 par 1 An instance of rdf:Property The property rdfs:subPropertyOf is an instance of rdf:Property or This property is an instance of rdf:Property A property may have zero, one, or more properties that it is a specialization of. A property may be a specialization of zero, one, or more properties. 2.3.5 par 2 schema given schema, given [not sure] 2.3.5 par 3 (ie., (i.e., 3. par 2 (e.g. (e.g., 3. par 3 behaviours behaviors 3. last par [rdf:value in Figure 3 (constraints.gif) has no range arrow. I am not sure if that is on purpose.] 3.2 par 1 centimetres centimeters 6. par 1 [URI is CODE once and plain text once; I'd choose one or the other.] 6.5 par 1 rdfs:domain <code>rdfs:domain</code> 7. Example 2 par 2 characterise characterize specialised specialized decentralised decentralized Appendix A - Compact XML Serialization serialisation serialization Reference [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/1999/PR-rdf-schema-19990303 Best of luck with your project, -- Susan Lesch susan@textet.com http://www.textet.com/
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