Re: Update to "Unordered Lists" QA tip

On Tue, Jul 26, 2005, Brian Huisman wrote:
> So, I rewrote the article from scratch.  The text is shorter, even  
> though the article itself is physically longer due to some HTML code  
> examples I included.  Hopefully the shorter length and inclusion of  
> examples and exclusion of a lot ;) of jargon will remove the  
> "lecturey" feel, and make it more like the "call to action" it was  
> meant to be.
> 
> This is my first draft: <http://www.greywyvern.com/code/unordered-lists>
 
I had a quick look at it: good draft. I think it is going in a much
better direction than the older text. 

For those who lack context on the existing tip and would like to compare
it to Brian's new draft:
http://www.w3.org/QA/Tips/unordered-lists
 
regards
-- 
olivier

Received on Wednesday, 27 July 2005 01:21:31 UTC