RE: Update to "Unordered Lists" QA tip

Very nice tip! 
As for the jargon-ish-y-ness how about something like "Group information
with lists." 
It conveys the info from the old tip: "By grouping applicable content
into lists, it gains meaning..."
Thanks,
Steve

Stephen Peterson 
Peterborough, ON

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-----Original Message-----
From: www-qa-request@w3.org [mailto:www-qa-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of
Brian Huisman
Sent: Tuesday, July 26, 2005 2:42 PM
To: www-qa@w3.org
Subject: Update to "Unordered Lists" QA tip





Greetings,

A short time ago, it was mentioned how the tip I wrote "Unordered  
Lists: More than just bullets" wasn't really a call to action like  
the other tips.  Indeed, I read it over after getting this note and  
it struck me that it read more like a school lecture than a "quick  
suggestion".

So, I rewrote the article from scratch.  The text is shorter, even  
though the article itself is physically longer due to some HTML code  
examples I included.  Hopefully the shorter length and inclusion of  
examples and exclusion of a lot ;) of jargon will remove the  
"lecturey" feel, and make it more like the "call to action" it was  
meant to be.

This is my first draft: <http://www.greywyvern.com/code/unordered-lists>

Comments appreciated.

Brian

Received on Tuesday, 26 July 2005 20:34:47 UTC