- From: Peterson, Stephen \(MNR\) <stephen.peterson@mnr.gov.on.ca>
- Date: Tue, 26 Jul 2005 16:33:58 -0400
- To: "Brian Huisman" <bhuisman@greywyvern.com>, <www-qa@w3.org>
Very nice tip! As for the jargon-ish-y-ness how about something like "Group information with lists." It conveys the info from the old tip: "By grouping applicable content into lists, it gains meaning..." Thanks, Steve Stephen Peterson Peterborough, ON "Google is, for all intents, a blind user. A billionaire blind user with tens of millions of friends, all of whom hang on his every word." -- Karsten M. Self -----Original Message----- From: www-qa-request@w3.org [mailto:www-qa-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Brian Huisman Sent: Tuesday, July 26, 2005 2:42 PM To: www-qa@w3.org Subject: Update to "Unordered Lists" QA tip Greetings, A short time ago, it was mentioned how the tip I wrote "Unordered Lists: More than just bullets" wasn't really a call to action like the other tips. Indeed, I read it over after getting this note and it struck me that it read more like a school lecture than a "quick suggestion". So, I rewrote the article from scratch. The text is shorter, even though the article itself is physically longer due to some HTML code examples I included. Hopefully the shorter length and inclusion of examples and exclusion of a lot ;) of jargon will remove the "lecturey" feel, and make it more like the "call to action" it was meant to be. This is my first draft: <http://www.greywyvern.com/code/unordered-lists> Comments appreciated. Brian
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