Re: minor comments for CR-MathML2-20001113

app A, all done as you suggest.

app F
F.1 second to last par. This could be a sentence (4 edits here):
     (Note the lack of quotation marks around the content, and
     the white space added around the content for readability,
     which is optional in MathML.)

In the source this is marked as a single paragraph beginning "For example...
It is only rendered as multiple paragraphs in HTML due to the overly
restrictive content model of HTML P element. 



> G. par2. 1-2
> stylesheet
> style sheet (three times)
done, although stylesheet is a fairly common form isn't it (and it
occurs in the title of the XSL FO CR for example) but perhaps not for
css... 


> H. par. 1
> organisations
> organizations

Hmp I suppose so, since we have used US spelling generally.

> H. Axis
> etc,
> etc.,
done
 
> H. Character or expression height
> know as
> known as
done
 
> H. Container (Constructor)
> Content
> content
As elsewhere, I've kept Presentation and Content capitalised.


 
> H. DSSSL
> method of specify
> method of specifying
done

 
> H. Instance of MathML
> toplevel
> top level
done
 
> H. Operator, an mo element
> elementmo
> element mo
done
 
> H. PCDATA
> recognised
> recognized
I suppose I ought to find a US ispell dictionary....
done.


 
> H. Schema
> plural: schemata
> plural: schemata or schemas
done
 
> H. TEX
> <b>T<sub>E</sub>X</b>
> <b>T</b><sub><b>E</b></sub><b>X</b>
> (The E is normal weight in MSIE 5 Mac without this fix.)
Complain to MS:-) (This markup is generated from an entity reference in the
source and it would be a pain to make the stylesheet special case 
instances that happened to be bold for one of any number of reasons.

 
> H. Token element
> Content
> content
As above kept this capitalised.



> I.1 second list
> Yortown (twice)
> Yorktown
already done in internal draft
 
> I.1 third list
> Specification
> specification
done
 
> I.1 last list
> Softquad
> SoftQuad
done
 
> I.2 par. 1
> Russel
> Russell
done
 
> K. AAP-math
> bethesda
> Bethesda
done
 
> K. Behaviors, DOM, Modularization, Namespaces, XHTML, XLink,
>     XMLSchemas, XPointer, and XSLT
> World-Wide Web Consortium
> World Wide Web Consortium (or W3C)
done
 
> K. Thieme1983
> formulas].. Reprint
> formulas]. Reprint
done
 
> K. XML
> Time Bray
> Tim Bray
done previously
 
> Sperberg-Mcqueen
> Sperberg-McQueen
done 


David

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