RE: Comments on Best Practices for Authoring HTML: RTL Scripts (Editorial comments only; was "Comments on Best Practices for Authoring HTML: RTL Scripts")

From: CE Whitehead [mailto:cewcathar@hotmail.com] 
Sent: 26 July 2009 19:44
To: ishida@w3.org; www-international@w3.org
Subject: RE: Comments on Best Practices for Authoring HTML: RTL Scripts
(Editorial comments only; was "Comments on Best Practices for Authoring
HTML: RTL Scripts")

 
Hi!
I'll try to read the rest of this draft
(http://www.w3.org/TR/i18n-html-tech-bidi/)
) more carefully!  Mati has done a better job.
One note for BP 11:
Section 7, BP 11,  "HOW TO,"  Par 3:
 
{COMMENT:  Change "allows" to "allow"--two items conjoined by "and" should
be treated as a plural; see
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/599/01/ }

"On the other hand, attribute text and element text that allows no internal
markup, . . . "

=> "On the other hand, attribute text and element text that allow no
internal markup


RI: Changed to 'attribute text or element text', (as per the text above)

RI